Author/Podcaster seeking help with feature script. Was mentored by a retired writer/producer. Script analysis shows structural problems.

Logline - A lesbian prosecutor is fired after being tangled in office politics, out of a job she finds true love while solving her beloved father, the Navy Admiral’s murder.

Comp films: Bound, Cloudburst, Carol meets Turtles Can Fly, or War Machine.

Something about me: 'I’m a Tiburon, CA poet. I am an author. A podcaster on topics of interest to survivors, to promote their successful recovery. I did it. But there is no cure! I work in the industry of autism, brain injury, affordable housing, disabilities.'

Please submit Covering Letter, Resume and one complete Writing Sample. This is a deferred pay gig with a view to crowd funding. This is an ideal opportunity for a writer with similar interests/issues looking to build their writing portfolio with the possibility of sale. Thank you!